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TERRALITE TEARS
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CHARACTERS
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MAIN
-GHAI
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-LODE
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SECONDARY
SCARLET
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WEAPONS
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GHAIS SWORD
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LODES SWORD
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SOLDIER
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RACES
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SAND PEOPLE
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WATER PEOPLE
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DRAGOON PEOPLE
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CREATURES
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CHIVVENS
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GIANT BURROWING SHRIMP
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EMPEROR SAND DRAKE
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LOGOS
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CHAPTERS
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CHAPTER 1
Chapter 1: "Dreams" White and Purple
It is on this day the orange sky had meant something. The smell of blood accompanied by laughter had disgusted him. For the first time had he ever felt such pain. Bandits had killed what remained of his "family" and he had simply stood there , mortified , mocked by the bandits... This child's name was Ghai (..) A fragment of what was , a memory from the past , a lost soul... It was his sensei that the bandits had killed. The same sensei that took care of him all these years , the same sensei who taught him about life , the same sensei who trained him , the same sensei , who died... Ghai's life had been spared out of pity , however , after the bandits had turned their backs , Ghai could not resist the temptation of revenge , and so , he reacted and took his master's sword , gripped it with all his might, gripped with such anger that he tore his skin apart ; the blood could be seen dripping from the handle of the sword , and so , after shedding one final tear , he striked...
*coming back to reality*
A brutal hit had shattered the ground...It is Ghai , 10 years later. This dream had been bothering him for a while. Terror had dominated his mind , but after realising it was only a dream , he smirked and looked up in the sky. "An orange sky ..." he whispered. He regained his calm and looked at the horizon ,"Damn , its so far away!" . He packed his things and got back to travelling.
And while he is travelling :
My name is Ghai. (You have no name)
18 years old... (Are you sure?)
I am currently a wonderer (Liar! You're a Vagabond)
10 years ago my sensei was killed by bandits.
He thought me everything , he took care of me
And I... I... I failed him. (You did what you could)
"Live life to its fullest!" he said...-heh what a load that is...
What is my goal then? (...)
Life? Yes , I want to know the meaning of life! (...You want revenge...)
Night had fallen and Ghai had grown tired from walking. He sat on the nearest rock he could find and sighed... He froze midway after he realised his surroundings. He had been travelling through a battlefield , one from the past , he could still see the corpses decaying. However he noticed that something was wrong , corpses , that were still fresh . He then realised he might not be alone and took his buster sword out. Unfortunately , upon lifting his sword , Ghai tripped , travelling had completely drained him. He was down on his knees breathing heavily and his head was getting dizzy. In all the confusion he realised that he was breathing thick acid fumes coming from the fresh corpses. "Sand Drakes..." he said in a pained voice. Out of caution , Ghai looked around him but after he turned his back , a brutal hit knocked him away. He was thrown unto a rock and so , with his back crushed in the rock , ghai's breathing got heavier and he then lifted his head up to see in front of him. It was definetly a Sand Drake , and a big one at that. The Sand drake leapt in the air towards ghai. Suddenly , it got completly dark and there was a circle on the ground emitting a purple light on both beings. They both seemed to be frozen in time , until Ghai stood up... He then walked up to the sand drake and gently put his hand on the beast's face. Ghai looked at it in the eyes with killer eyes. He could see the creature's eyes , panicking in fear. He then spoke those words : "Liv.....fe.....th.......llest..." and then Ghai gripped the sand drake's face with brute force and the head blew up , scattering blood and brain everywhere. Keeping his killer eyes , Ghai walked up to his sword and picked it up. In a flash second , the sand drake's body leapt and ambushed Ghai from behind , so he swung his sword backwards and cut the monster vertically in half. He looked at the remains with his sword still plunged on the ground ; he then smirked and got away from the acid fumes. In the far distance he noticed numerous lights , it was a village and it seemed to be but only an hour away. On his way there , he looked around , noticing all the critters that live here , including the infamous Giant Burrowing shrimps he heard about. After finally arriving in the village , he decides that he needs to rest , so he looks around for an INN. After pretty much 5 minutes he stumbled on a building that quite possibly looked like an INN. He looked at the sign next to the door. He read "INN" .......
"What the fuck..." He said with a retarded expression. "Whatever..." he thought , and he walked in.
It was quite a lively corner of the world , lots of smoking , people fighting over stupid things , lots of drunks , especially this one drunk that REALLY stood out (Thats right , its Lode XD!!!) . Ghai observed that person for a moment : He looked like a knight yet didn't have the full armor , "maybe an apprentice knight" Ghai thought. In any case , this guy was drunk as shit!!! He was sitting next to a very shady person who also was pretty drunk.
"Need a room?" ... Ghai looked behind him , it was the barman. "Uhhh yea.."
"That'll be 1000 gil , buddy"...
"WHAAAAA?!!! I don't have that much!!! Im barely beginning the story!!!"
The barman tightened his muscles "Im the only INN in town , kid , pay up or go sleep outside with the Sand drakes !"
"But... All I have are these horns !" ....The barman thinks to himself.. (Hmm , those horns are worth so much more than 1000 gil...heheheh....)... "Okay , kid , i'll let you go , but only this time!!!"
"Thank you so much sir!" *COUGH*fucking ass*COUGH*
"Got a cold eh? Here are your keys , the room is on the second floor."
Ghai nods and goes towards the stairs while the barman is laughing his ass off , hugging his horns. Ghai entered his room... "Fuck ... I got ripped off..."
It was a very damp room with only one window and there wasn't any bed to sleep on. Ghai put away his things and looked out the window. Again he saw Lode , drunk to death trying to make his way home but instead simply fell on the ground and started snoring. Ghai chuckled in a mocking way and fell asleep.
[Dream Sequence]
[Sand guy going through Ghai's stuff]
"What the hell..."... Ghai woke up and almost automaticaly , like a zombie , got up and went to pee.
He walked pass the Sand guy who was frozen still , came back passing by the Sand guy again and finally went to sleep... again. Almost 2 seconds after lying down , Ghai realized something was wrong (he had a "dumb" face) and looked at the Sand guy.
"Uh , good morning -_-?"
The sand guy panicked and ran away with Ghai's bag
"WHAT THE HELL?!!! COME BACK YOU #$&@&!"
He picked up his sword and started making chaos ; he destroyed the wall instead of going through the door , he jumped from the stairs and while attempting to slice the sand guy , his sword got caught on the ceiling , resulting in massive destruction of the INN and finally destroyed the counter which was 2 inches away from the Sand guy...
"WTF ,THIS GUY IS FUCKING CRAZY!!!!" Screamed out the sand guy while running tenfold faster.
Ghai pops out from all of the dust and rubble , "GET BACK HERE!!!"
After running throughout the village and destroying everything whilst running after the sand guy , Ghai super jumped in the air preparing for a massive attack that is sure to reach the little bastard.
The sand guy jumps in a man's arms (Right , its Lode ...and he's got a small hangover).Lode heavily lifts his head up and sees Ghai going towards him and at the last moment , dodges him.
In slow motion , Ghai looks at Lode dodging while he is looking stupefied at the crater that Ghai had made.
Ghai [He...dodged...?]
Lode [Wow... This guy's strong]
Then Ghai asks Lode " Is this nasty little bastard yours?!"
Lode: " Yes...?"
Ghai : " Well tell him to give me back my stuff!!!!"
Lode: " Your 'stuff' ? You mean that?" *he points towards the crater.*
Ghai turns around and finds out that , in fact , he just "destroyed" his bag while trying to get Lode and the Sand guy.
Ghai turns to Lode: "WTF , THIS IS YOUR FAULT!!!!"
Lode : "Why if you're the one swinging that thing..."- *He sees Ghai dashing at him with a terrifying aura and increased speed.
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STORYBOARD CHAPTER 1
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woo finaly done with storyboarding now on to the real deal
hopefully chapter one will give us a few pages to work on
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CHAPTER 2 summary
: Freedom"The prisonners and the thief"
As Ghai was charging towards Lode , the sand dude leapt out of Lode's arms and hid itself somewhere safe.Lode dodge's Ghai's 2nd attack . Suprised again he charged once more.This time Lode unsheathed his sword and manages to parry Ghai and actually even pushes him back. Lode starts acting cool and all ghai gets pissed and some kick ass fight starts. The odds are going againts Ghai as this is his first time fighting againts such a skilled person. The fight expands and ghai manages to make a real big mess of the village while Lode is having too much fun to notice. After much fighting ghai gets exhausted and resorts to using his Crystal to stop time . Since he is pissed , this time a HUGE circle of radius appears under him ... However , for some reason , his power did not do anything , it was as the circle could not release its power. And so Lode takes this chance to strike at Ghai. It was by a margin , but Ghai managed just a bare scratch , the slash had gone across his face , cutting Ghai's headband(or whatever thats hiding his crystal) in the process.
And in slow motion , as the headband tears off , scars along with the crystal on ghais forehead were revealed to everybody.There is this slight pause where Lode manages to see a figment of ghai's dream at that moment. Barely managing a dodge , ghai is starting to panic because he can't use his power anymore while Lode is looking at Ghai with a horrified look. Lode repeats the words that ghai said to the monster in chapter 1. Pause... Then suddenly out of the blue , Royal knights appear and arrest BOTH ghai AND lode. I'll leave the arresting scene to Monkyd (make it funny).
Anyway , ghai wakes up in the cell , upon opening his eyes , he see's Lode staring at him with wide open eyes. They hit each other's heads (cuz ghai gets supprised and jumps up). Lode starts being friendly and all. Ghai stays silent and refuses to chat while Lode is talking his ass off. He talks about himself , his past , why he wants to be a knight... ect.. At one point ghai just explodes and swings "air" at him! Lodes like "uhhh , what are you doing?" and ghai responds retardly "ehh... wheres my swordXD?" . Lode tells em they took all their stuff and put em away on a table in the hallway. A person's silhouete appears in a different cell opposite to theirs. Its a girl (Scarlet). She's asking them what they took away from them and all. Lode and Scarlet have a chat while ghai is pretending not to listen. After a long chat scarlet gets up , both ghai and lode look puzzled wondering what shes about to do. She pulls out a needle out of nowhere , picks the lock open and gets out oh her cell. Both Ghai and Lode have stupefied faces and ghai starts begging like a fag to scarlet to let HIM out. Scarlet mocks them , goes somewhere , comes back with a bag full of stuff
asks them if thats their stuff , they say yes , and then she smiles and just runs away XD. Of course now they both went insane.After almost 2 hours of insanity , they get visited by the jailor and he grins evilly " Time to get out , biatches!"
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